
The second poem challenge was to write an "I used to be... But now I am..." poem. I had some trouble brainstorming one of these, so my poem turned into a different comparison poem of winter and spring. Here is a draft.
In Winter, In Spring
In winter, I shovel snow.
In spring, my umbrella keeps me dry.
In winter, flakes dance in the wind
In spring, the sky begins to cry.
In winter, I wear mittens.
In spring, my hands are free.
In winter, I build snowmen.
In spring, the flowers I see.
In winter, all is quiet.
In spring, the birds begin to sing.
In winter, I am freezing cold.
In spring, I feel the warmth of the sun
In winter, the poem began.
In spring, the poem is done.
2 comments:
Nice comparison!
I like the way you've changed up the form. Nice pairing of winter and spring!
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