
We have been working on personal narratives at school. This week we read Ghost's Hour, Spook's Hour by Eve Bunting. Then we brainstormed, planned and wrote about a time when we were scared. I love how Ms. Bunting uses sound words and great descriptive writing. My model was about the tornadoes experienced in our community a couple of years ago.

I Remember Poem
I remember the sky turning dark even though it was late afternoon.
I remember the sound of the powerful blowing wind.
I remember the brightly colored weather maps on t.v.
And then only black as all the power ceased.
I remember the screaming of the warning sirens.
I remember collecting the couch cushions and crawling into the space under the stairs.
I remember listening to the crashing, the banging and the howling
I remember the terrifying waiting
Even praying that it would all be over soon.
I remember the silence after the storm, the destruction and the fear.
I want to forget, but in the spring, I always remember.
3 comments:
OMG!
May I share this with my students Amy?
Best,
Stacey from TWT
Wow. This is amazing! Your images are so strong and clear.
Wow
I agree with the others -- the strength of words brings a sense of fear and disaster for the reader.
Thanks for sharing, Amy, but sorry that you had this event as inspiration.
Kevin
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